Rough Cut Feedback 2

In out previous lesson we showed the class our updated our editing and adding titles that needed to be added, we was made to show our peers so that we could get feedback on what we did and things w improved on. two of our fellow peers both said that the liked the title effect they was used when showing the characters and who they were in order of importance and the way that it was displayed. it wasn't just anywhere it was thought of. they said it was positioned was very good as well as it wasn't a distraction to what was actually going on in the scene.

They also said they enjoyed the shaky camera effect that was used throughout, it was just put anywhere like if you had no idea what you was doing but it was done well enough to be put in places that it needed to be adding effect helping build that suspense that they could see. the shaky also wasn't a continued thing it was going on and on and on throughout the whole thing it was used only when needed.

An improvement that they gave us was that at the beginning of the film there was a bright flash after showing the director and that it should be changed of something different should be used as it is not a common thing that is used within horror film type genres.

However another peer named Luke had said that he liked the way it looked because it looked like a fluent transition between the two as it flowed nicely when starting the beginning of the Horror film introduction, without any interruption.