Rough Cut Feedback

My group showed our rough cut of our horror film and we wrote down the feed back both positive and negative. Each group gave back their feedback.

One person said that the story line was good and the way we used the camera was good. however it would have been better to have seen more of a variety of lighting and they found it confusing with the heavy breath. 

Also another person said that even though we said we wanted to change part of it, it made sense to her, the story line was clear and that the idea of the contact lenses were good as it showed that she was becoming possessed. however she thought that we should do the changes we planed so it showed Shariece leaving the room.

Another person from a different group said that the music went well with the scene and what was happening in it, that it didn't look forced (we didn't put on an act it was just as if the camera wasn't there) and we recorded things that were relevant. However, they said that we needed more camera angles as out rough cut was a hand help type of movie. 

Another person said that the darkness,and the way we set everything out made it seem homemade and that we didn't know the video was there. But we could have more camera angles and we need to put the scene that we wanted to change in the movie so that it would make more sense to him.